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Deviantart has been putting viruses on my computer :( so i wont be on for a while, but I WILL RETURN!!!! So sorry to those reading the Amaranthine story (Candice >_<) and happy summer vacation to everyone! Also I have been getting obsessively addicted to Creepypasta and PewDiePie! XD Well, good bye, my subjects!!!!!
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Deviantart has been putting viruses on my computer :( so i wont be on for a while, but I WILL RETURN!!!! So sorry to those reading the Amaranthine story (Candice >_<) and happy summer vacation to everyone! Also I have been getting obsessively addicted to Creepypasta and PewDiePie! XD Well, good bye, my subjects!!!!!
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    Chapter 5: 
    I had realized how bad my feet hurt, my stomach growled, and my head ached until Elisabeth confessed how hungry she was. 
    "Yeah," Lucy added with her eyelids dropping, "I'm getting really sleepy, too."
    "My feet hurt," Alice complained, lifting her leg behind her to rub her own heel. 
    I stopped and glanced back behind us, looking at nothing more than an endless glossy hall. 
    "Hey, Ellie," I said and looked over at her. She glanced up at me and seemed startled yet pleased at the nickname. I continued, "How do you know we haven't been going in circles?" She just shrugged, and a smirk poked through her nonchalant expression. 
    "Just do I guess."
    We kept walking, not a single Bull in our way. As we walked, I noticed Alice and Lucy behind me. Lucy had head eyes closed and her head resting on Alice's shoulder with her arms wrapped around Alice's as she walked, and Alice just walked silently, a soft smile on her face. Elisabeth, who walked in front of me, bounced along like she was a child in a toy store. It made me smile, the thought of becoming friends so easily. But all good times were interrupted by a screaming siren, the lights cutting off, and a scarlet light that flickered on and off. 
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    Chapter 4: Learning
    When the cells to the blonde and the twins were open, the blonde had approached the twins, who were being cautiously hesitant. She told them they were free and they listened, stepping out into the room. I turned to the rest of the cell's prisoners, and upon seeing their helpless gazes, I wanted to liberate all of them. The blonde must have hacked back into my thoughts, because she said, "Some of them are more of a danger to be free." 
    I faced her, anger bubbling in me then being calmed by understanding in a big wave of mixed emotions. 
    "Okay, you're free. Now, how do we get out of here in one piece?"
    The blonde shook her head, "I believe an introduction is more important right now. My name is Elisabeth Mark, and these are the twins, Lucy and Alice. You can tell them apart by their ribbons. Lucy's on the right pigtail, and Alice on the left." She turned to them, "Girls, this is Ash."
    They remained silent, then at one time waved a hand. 
    "Alright, now, we exit through-" Elisabeth stopped and looked at the prisoners, distrust in her eyes. She motioned towards the door, murmuring inaudibly to Alice, who nodded and clenched her eyes shut. She opened them back and whispered a quiet "All clear". Elisabeth walked to the door as the rest of us followed. She noticed my limping and stopped me. 
    "We won't get anywhere with you like that."
     She knelt beside my foot and rested her hands over my ankle. I felt a cold sensation, making the throbbing pain numb, then warmth, then the pain was gone. I stared in disbelief at her and wiggled my foot. She rose as I muttered a thank you, still watching my painless foot movements. Elisabeth opened the door and we all left the prison room. 
    In the long empty hallway, she continued her previous statement.
    "We exit through here and just follow the labyrinth of hallways until we're home free."
    "However," she continued, "If you want to save your friend, we can't leave."
    Both Alice and Lucy dropped their jaws and I cocked my head like a dog trying to understand. 
    "We'll never make it out of here and to his house in time, and if we try to get him from the Launching Station, we're right back to square one. We're going to have to go through here to the Launching Station and board the shuttle before anyone gets there." 
    "Are you nuts?" both girls hissed. "We're not-" Alice began. "Risking our lives-" Lucy continued. "For her," they finished in complete harmony. 
    Elisabeth began to protest when I chimed in.
    "It's okay. I don't expect them to trust me or even care for me. They can just stay here and lock themselves back in the cage."
    They're eyes welled with fear and they're hands clenched around each other's. They both looked at each other, then back to Elisabeth. 
    "Fine," Alice sighed irritably. 
    "We'll go," Lucy added, her tone less hostile.
    Elisabeth smiled, obviously pleased by their answer. 
    "Good. Now, we find our way to the Launching Station," she chirped.
    "And how do we do that without dying along the way?"
    "Luck!" Elisabeth laughed and started walking down the glossy white hall. "Oh," she stopped and faced me, "and the Twins."
    We started walking, no idea where we were going, with Elisabeth happily bouncing as she walked full of optimism. Then Lucy stopped, halting her sister with her. She stared at Alice, her face twisted with concern. 
    "What is it, Lucy-chan?" Alice asked. Lucy only shushed her. Elisabeth stopped and looked back at us.
    "Listen," Lucy whispered.
    We all stood there like stones, not making a single sound. Then we heard it. The thudding of Bull feet. Alice and Lucy panicked, holding each other tightly. I looked in front of me at the closest turn in the hall then back at the end, trying to figure out where he's coming from. 
    "Alice!" Elisabeth barked, her expression back to the rock solid determination I had seen before. Alice closed her eyes, then opened them and said, "That way." She pointed to our closest turn. 
    The steps were getting louder. 
    "Run!" Elisabeth commanded, and we all ran towards the end of the hallway. 
    "They heard us. They're coming!" Alice cried, gripping Lucy's hand so tight it might burst. We heard the footsteps faster and harder, loud and closer. 
    "Halt!" 
    I turned to see two Bulls charging towards us. I ran faster.
    "Lucy!" Elisabeth yelled.
    Elisabeth grabbed my wrist, then Alice's as she gripped tighter onto Lucy, who stopped running, making us all lurch back, and closed her eyes. What I seen next took my breath away.
    Lucy's pigtails started to dissolve into specks, creeping up to her face then down her body. Her eyes were closed and her eyebrows suggested she was in peace. When it got to her hand, which Alice was holding, Alice's hand began to do the same, then the rest of her. It was a chain reaction, sending Elisabeth into specks as well, whose face unfolded with peace like the twins', and I swear I saw her lips curl at the corners just the slightest. Then it got to me. When my fingertips flaked away into hundreds of pieces, I felt fear hit my heart like a thousand pound boulder, waiting for the pain, but instead I felt nothing. If anything, I felt numbness and serenity. I felt like I was in heaven.  I closed my eyes just after I seen the Bulls so close that they could grab me. 
    "Ash?"
    I opened my eyes to see Elisabeth standing over me worriedly and Lucy with her fist over her mouth and on the verge of tears. Alice stood beside her acting as if she could care less. I sat up and gasped.
    "Did you do that?!" I asked Lucy, whose eyes closed in relief as her hand lowered, revealing a small smile. 
    "Yeah, I did." 
    I grinned as Elisabeth did. 
    "That was remarkable, Lucy! You saved us."
    Her face reddened and she opened her eyes. Alice stood there staring at the wall.
    Elisabeth wrapped her arm around Alice and told me, "Alice could see the Bulls. That's her skill. She has like X-ray vision."
    Alice shrugged her off, "Heat. I can sense heat. The Bulls may be cloaked in metal, but they have one weak spot."
    I thought for a minute.
    "The slit in the mouth." Alice nodded.
    "I can see the heat from their lips."
    I stared at her in awe.
    "That's amazing. You saved us, too."
    Alice looked genuinely shocked, as if it's the first time she was ever thanked. She grunted and went back to staring at the wall. Elisabeth put her hands on her hips and walked back over to me. 
    "Quite the dynamic duo aren't they?" 
    I nodded. I admired both of them, as well as Elisabeth. I then looked around. 
    "Um, where are we now?" 
    Elisabeth shrugged and Lucy replied, "As far as I could take us." 
    "Why can't we just do, um, that out of here?" 
    Before Lucy could answer, Alice snapped at me, "It makes her weak, that much strain could kill her."
    "Oh..."
    I stared at both of them. They were much easier to discriminate than just the ribbons in their hair. By appearances, they are one of the same, but by personality they couldn't be more different. Lucy is more shy and sweet, soft-spoken. But Alice is very protective, jealous, loud, and hostile towards me. Elisabeth was just silly and bubbly altogether, unless she was determined, then she got that fire in her eyes. The determination varies, too, like the first time it was determined to escape. A few minutes ago, it was determination to live. I smiled. 
    Lucy and Elisabeth smiled back, while Alice looked puzzled. I stood up. 
    "So why was I on the floor?"
    Lucy smiled apologetically.
    "Some people can't handle the movement, and you fainted."
    Elisabeth motioned for us to walk with her as we ventured forth to get out of here.
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   Chapter 3: Escaping
    "Donny! What-" I cried, but he cut me off.
    "Go, they can't get to you now. Go. And never say die" He smiled at me with that sweet, warm smile. Tears fell from my eyes as I stared up at him.
    "No... No!" 
    "I love y-"
    A dog pounced on him, razor teeth digging into his face. Donny screamed, blood pouring from his head. I clamped a hand to my mouth, afraid I was going to vomit right there. I wanted to run, but I couldn't pull my eyes from him as the dogs ripped him to pieces. His multi-tool fell from his hand and through the grate to my feet. His remaining eye, a glimmering green eye, stared at me with fear and desperation, then it faded and cleared of all emotion. He was free.
    I picked up the tool before I managed to make my legs run, my body crouched so I could move through the small hole. I could smell something terrible, like dead animals. I slipped, my heart stopping as my foot went from beneath me, and went sliding down the stone tube. I couldn't see anything until the tube opened up to another larger room, and I slid off that tube and fell into a dark pool. Panic clutched me, and I kicked my feet and flailed my arms, holding my breath. I don't know how to swim, and my lungs started to ache. I violently trashed around in the water, every fiber in my body burning like an inferno. I finally pushed back up to the surface and gasped for air. I looked around franticly, but failed to see anything but a dim scarlet light. I attempted to swim by flailing myself around. I must have moved myself at one point, because my hand eventually slammed against wet concrete. I gripped on the best I could onto the concrete with both hands. I pulled myself up onto concrete, and let my body go limp, too tired to move. My burning muscles relaxed in a wave of cold ice. 
    The foul scent was back, well, it never left, I just started paying attention to it again. Then I realized what it was coming from. 
    The water I just came from was a sickening shade of crimson and shreds and chunks of various body parts bobbed in the bloody water. The smell was a hundred rotting corpses left in water. And that's what the grate was for, to rinse out the remains of the dead.
    I fell over and vomited over and over, my entire body trembling and my head hurting like a mother. After I threw up all I had in me, I wiped my mouth and stood up.
    "So, this is the punished."
    I scanned the room. The only light was the scarlet light that painted the dark room. The air was hot and sticky, and the room, I noticed, was just a piece of one big maze. I walked down the concrete piece, turning into the next long, scarlet hall. I pulled the hem of my wife-beater up over my nose. My skin grew sticky and uncomfortable, and I began to sweat, so I pulled off my scarf and tied it around my waist. I wiped my forehead and pushed my hair behind my ears as I kept on walking down the paths, hoping to find a way out. 
    After what seemed like a century, the air started to cool and the scent weakened. I noticed the nasty water getting clearer the farther I walked. By now, my body was dripping with perspiration and my sticky face burned. The cool was like an oasis for me, and I breathed in deeply. I glanced up at the ceiling and seen the source of my heaven. It was a wide grate that blew out cold air.
    "An air duct!" I exclaimed. I felt hope rise in me like a baking cake, but it quickly shriveled to disappointment when I realized that I'm on the ground and it's up there. I hit my head with my palms. 
    "Think, damn it! Think!"
    After what seemed like hours of thinking, I finally collapsed to the cold stone floor in defeat. I felt my bottom lip start to quiver, then bit my lip to stop it. I am not going to cry, not now. I laid my hand down on my waist, feeling my bracelet move up and down on my wrist and the soft fuzz of my scarf. Then, an idea hit me. I grinned at myself and hurried to my feet. I untied the scarf, then pulled off my bracelet. I tied one end of the scarf to the bracelet, tightened it, then stood beneath the grate. I tossed the bracelet up, but it only hit the grate, sending a loud clang through the air. I cringed, the tried again. I tried so many more times, then when all hope seemed lost, I thought of Donny. I seen him beside me, encouraging me to keep on and never give up. Never say die, he told me. 
    "Never say die," I repeated aloud. With full focus and confidence, I threw the bracelet up at the grate; it went through one of the holes, then fell out of the hole beside it. 
    "Yes!"
    I stretch out the arm that had a hold of the end of the scarf and used the other to reach for the bracelet. On my tip-toes now, I grabbed the bracelet and pulled the end of the scarf through it, then let go of the bracelet, pulling down. The bracelet hit the grate, making a secure rope for me to climb. I wrapped the scarf once around my hand, gripping it tight. I pulled myself up, reaching with the other hand and wrapping it once. I repeated this until I reached the grate. I pulled Donny's multi-tool from my back pocket with one free hand, and somehow managed to undo both bolts holding the grate down, or up, should I say. The grate opened out, making the scarf-rope swing around, and I almost let go. I cried out impulsively, then used my free hand to grab the other side of the grate. I let the rope go and grabbed the grate with both hands. I pulled myself up inside the hole, my arms feeling like they're on fire. When I was finally inside the air duct, I let my body fall over like I did before, but this time I let a dry laughter escape my throat. I am the luckiest person in the world, I thought to myself. My heart was racing.
    The air in here was bitterly cold, but after the humid heat, I didn't mind. It smelt a lot better in here, too, like a refreshing and invigorating scent, not rotting corpses, however, my clothes, which were now dry, still had the scent lingering on them. I got up and started to walk, the round duct making me wobble a little. I didn't know where I was going, but I didn't care. I wandered around for at least an hour, and the cold darkness made me realize how tired I was. My eyelids started to droop, and I tripped, actually falling on my face. I sat up on my knees, groaning. My palms hurt from skidding on the concrete to stop myself from falling. I tried to look at them, but I couldn't see anything in the blackness of this place. I got up, and continued walking. 
    I was growing afraid that I'd never escape this place, that I'd just die right here, but I mostly feared that I'd go insane. I was already growing delusional, seeing little things every now and then like bugs or light that wasn't there. I kept falling over, my body kept trying to shut down, but I would remind it why we were here and get back up. I had to get out of here for Donny. And Nathan. He's the reason I'm here in the first place, I was coming for him. I will make it out of here and get to him before the shuttle launches. 
    I promise.

    After an eternity, I finally seen a light. It was dim, and I thought to be dreaming again, but as I walked closer, it grew larger and brighter. I reached it to see it was another grate. I looked through the bars and examined the room below. It seemed empty from what I could see, so I pulled Donny's tool out again and unscrewed the two bolts and let it swing open. I sat on the edge of it, letting my legs hang down. I twisted my body around, my palms pressed against the concrete, and slowly let my body lower. When I was hanging by my fingertips, I let go and hit the tiled floor hard. I gasped at the pain pulsing through my ankle as it bent unnaturally. I sat upright and looked up, seeing the rows of cages on both sides of the large room. In every cage was a person, old or young, male or female, it didn't matter. They all stared at me with fear in their glossy eyes. There was a door on the farthest wall. I stood up, hesitantly, then limped across the room as they all stared, surprisingly silent. Close to the end of the cages, I heard a small, feminine voice.
    Ashley. 
    I stopped and looked at the cage to my right where a young girl, probably a few years behind me, stared intently at me. She had thick, wavy blond hair that fell past her shoulders, and olive green cat eyes. She wore a white, button-up uniform shirt with the short sleeves, round collar, and front pocket tucked into a navy blue, knife pleated skirt without a belt. She wore white knee-high stockings with shiny black tap sandals and a large, black bow that sat atop her head. She seemed like the perfect good girl, all except her outfit was dirty and wrinkled and her skin and hair looked as if she hadn't bathed in months. I started to limp away when I heard it again, louder this time.
    ASHLEY.
    I stopped and glared at her. Her stare wasn't like the others, filled with jealousy and fear, it was full of concentration. I stepped towards her.
    "Is that you?"
    She kept silently staring at me. 
    "It is, isn't it?" 
    Her glare never faltered.
    Yes, it is me, if you mean the one talking to you.
    I took a step back. 
    "How can you-"
    How can you freeze time or move things without touching them? 
    I gasped as my eyes widened. 
    We're both the same, Ashley. We're not the only ones either.
    I gave her a puzzled look. 
    Turn around.
    I hesitated, then slowly turned my head to see the cage behind me. Two Japanese girls about my age sat against the wall huddled together. They were dressed in the same clothes with the same hair and face. Twins. They had long, blackish blue hair pulled into thin, high pigtails that would touch the floor if they stood, with straight bangs that fell right on their eyebrows and bright, baby blue eyes with icy pale skin. In their pigtails, each of them had one white ribbon on one pigtail. They wore black, long-sleeved, lolita-style dresses that reached their knees and had a white, semi-circle piece below the neck, which was a high white piece with a thin, black ribbon forming a bow, with black buttons on it and lace on the hem. At the end of the sleeves was a white buttoned piece, and the dresses ruffled at the bottom. It looked like a maid's dress without the apron. They wore high white socks with a ruffled top and black platform lolita shoes with little white bows on the straps. 
    They both turned to face me at the same time. 
    Those two girls are just like us, and they can help you, as can I, but only if you let us out, the blonde girl said behind me. 
    I faced her. 
    "How can I trust you? I don't even know you. Besides, I don't need help."
    I think you do. You are trying to get out of here alive, am I correct? You'll never get past the Bulls without us. 
    "How do you know that? Get out of my head! I can do it on my own." 
    Maybe you'll get out of here, but you'll never save poor Nathan.
    I jumped on the bars of the cage.
    "You don't know what you're talking about. Get out of my head! Now!" I snarled. I stared her in the eye. I didn't see any emotion, just determination. No hate, mischief, or fear at all, just pure determination. I sighed.
    "How?"
    Her eyes lit up with victory.
    See the key rack over there?
    I glanced over at the farthest wall where the door was and seen a small key rack holding a ring of keys glinting in the light. 
    "Yeah?"
    The round key. Get it and release me. Release us.
    I started to step away when she reached through and gripped my arm, making me jump.
    "Hey!"
    Use your powers.
    She let go and I hesitated.
    "Why haven't you just used your powers to escape?"
    A grin pushed in the corners of her mouth for just a split second before it fell back to her lifeless frown.
    I don't possess the ability to move objects with my mind, Ashley.
    "Neither do I!" I exclaimed. 
    Yes, you do, Ashley. I can see it within you. Just concentrate.
    "It's Ash," I corrected, a low growl in my voice.
    I turned and focused on the keys. I concentrated until my head felt like it was going to burst, but they didn't even shake. I breathed out in frustration.
    "I can't do it!"
    Yes you can. Picture it. Believe it. Hurry.
    I imagined myself walking over there and picking up the keys and tossing them into my hand, and sure enough, the keys went flying across the room right into my palm. 
    I gasped and heard a few awes behind me. I faced the girl, whose look of determination had melted and been replaced with a sweet smile and innocent eyes. 
    Good job, Ash. 
    "Now, please, let us free," she said aloud.

 
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